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benjamindaymon
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Post subject: Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem  Posted: Tue Oct 14, 2008 6:41 pm |
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OctoberChill
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Post subject: Re: Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 8:41 pm |
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GREAT poem. One of the best Halloween poems I've read, and I've read a lot.
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benjamindaymon
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Post subject: Re: Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 10:08 pm |
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Well thank you very much.  That's about the nicest compliment I could have hoped for. Happy Halloween! Ben
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Post subject: Re: Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem Posted: Thu Oct 16, 2008 8:14 am |
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You kiddin' Me...?
That was fantastic!
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All you that doth my grave pass by,
As you are now so once was I,
As I am now so you must be,
Prepare for death & follow me.
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Halloween_crazyy
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Post subject: Re: Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem Posted: Thu Oct 16, 2008 7:56 pm |
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Wow thats amazing! 
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adrian
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Post subject: Re: Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem Posted: Fri Oct 17, 2008 6:43 pm |
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That poem was very entertaining. I love to read independent writers works and that was quite a piece of art. Loved it. 
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Last night 'twas witching Hallowe'en
Dearest; an apple russet- brown
I pared, and thrice above my crown
Whirled the long skin; they watched in keen;
I flung it far; they laughed and cried me shame
Dearest, there lay the letter of your name!
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Post subject: Re: Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem Posted: Thu Oct 30, 2008 12:34 pm |
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wow that was awesome you're a great writer
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You're a great friend but if the zombies chase us i'm tripping you
When witches go riding,
and black cats are seen,
the moon laughs and whispers,
‘tis near Halloween.
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benjamindaymon
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Post subject: Re: Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem Posted: Thu Oct 30, 2008 9:58 pm |
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Thanks again, everyone for your comments. It's good to get feedback and even better when it's positive.
Happy Halloween!
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