Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem

Halloween writing, poetry, fan pics and more!
User avatar
benjamindaymon
Zombie
Posts: 15
Joined: Tue Oct 14, 2008 11:41 am
What is the highest number?: 9
Location: Thornton, PA
Contact:

Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem

Postby benjamindaymon » Tue Oct 14, 2008 6:41 pm

Following is a link to my Halloween poem entitled: Whole World Hidden - Comments appreciated. -- Thanks!

http://www.associatedcontent.com/article/1082037/whole_world_hidden_a_halloween_poem.html
User avatar
OctoberChill
Halloween Master
Posts: 849
Joined: Wed Jun 04, 2008 9:52 pm
What is the highest number?: 10992
Location: Texas

Re: Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem

Postby OctoberChill » Wed Oct 15, 2008 8:41 pm

GREAT poem. One of the best Halloween poems I've read, and I've read a lot.
User avatar
benjamindaymon
Zombie
Posts: 15
Joined: Tue Oct 14, 2008 11:41 am
What is the highest number?: 9
Location: Thornton, PA
Contact:

Re: Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem

Postby benjamindaymon » Wed Oct 15, 2008 10:08 pm

Well thank you very much. :o That's about the nicest compliment I could have hoped for.

Happy Halloween!

Ben
User avatar
Andybev01
Halloween Master
Posts: 11560
Joined: Tue Apr 29, 2008 1:44 pm
What is the highest number?: 9
Location: Spook Central.

Re: Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem

Postby Andybev01 » Thu Oct 16, 2008 8:14 am

You kiddin' Me...?

That was fantastic!
All you that doth my grave pass by,
As you are now so once was I,
As I am now so you must be,
Prepare for death & follow me.
User avatar
Halloween_crazyy
Haunt Master
Posts: 221
Joined: Sun Oct 12, 2008 7:08 am
What is the highest number?: 9
Location: Canada

Re: Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem

Postby Halloween_crazyy » Thu Oct 16, 2008 7:56 pm

Wow thats amazing! :D
H A P P Y H A L L O W E E N !
User avatar
adrian
Halloween Master
Posts: 6231
Joined: Fri Oct 17, 2008 5:55 pm
What is the highest number?: 10992
Location: Buice Manor in Beulah AL

Re: Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem

Postby adrian » Fri Oct 17, 2008 6:43 pm

That poem was very entertaining. I love to read independent writers works and that was quite a piece of art. Loved it. :)
Last night 'twas witching Hallowe'en
Dearest; an apple russet- brown
I pared, and thrice above my crown
Whirled the long skin; they watched in keen;
I flung it far; they laughed and cried me shame
Dearest, there lay the letter of your name!
User avatar
grim writer
Zombie
Posts: 19
Joined: Fri Oct 24, 2008 12:35 pm

Re: Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem

Postby grim writer » Thu Oct 30, 2008 12:34 pm

wow that was awesome you're a great writer :D
You're a great friend but if the zombies chase us i'm tripping you
When witches go riding,
and black cats are seen,
the moon laughs and whispers,
‘tis near Halloween.
User avatar
benjamindaymon
Zombie
Posts: 15
Joined: Tue Oct 14, 2008 11:41 am
What is the highest number?: 9
Location: Thornton, PA
Contact:

Re: Whole World Hidden: A Halloween Poem

Postby benjamindaymon » Thu Oct 30, 2008 9:58 pm

Thanks again, everyone for your comments. It's good to get feedback and even better when it's positive.

Happy Halloween!

Return to “Halloween Writing”

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 1 guest